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clarity25 Jul. 25, 2004 -- 2:36 p.m. |
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| clarity25 Username - Numbers. Oh joy. First Impression - Your entry length is overwhelming. Jesus christ. I garuntee that nothing you have to say is THAT interesting or important. Errors - None of the images work on your archives page... which, by the by, does not match. A few typos here and there, nothing too serious. 6/10 Layout - I guess I've seen worse. The picture isn't centered, but I guess one wouldn't notice if one weren't looking. Why is "About me" capitalized when nothing else is? Sorry, it just bothers me when things aren't uniform. For the most part, things are organized. I don't know. I just don't really like your layout. Credit to Raging Pistachio Designs. It's not a bad layout, it's just... not my kind of layout. 14/20 Content - I'm going to warn you now, I probably won't read very many of these entries because they're so fucking long. I'm starting here and working my way backwards. Hm. I've noticed you transition quite nicely from one idea to the next. That's good. Most people can't do that. I liked the wedding entry. I'm really not sure why, because it was obscenely long too and most of the time I really don't give a damnm about weddings. Dear, please. American men have no problem discussing their sex lives either. Okay, so, I really really really want to hate you. It's not working so well though. You're not angsty... or a teenager. You do have your off days, but you're human. So really, just... work on the length thing. I don't want to keep reading because it takes too damn long. Most of your entries are upbeat and somewhat humorous. I just don't like how long they are. Or your layout. Change your layout or something. 40/65 Would I Come Back? - If I were bored and needed something to keep me occupied for a really long time. 1/5 Bonus - You corrected my spelling. I know you expected to take a beating for that, but... +1/5 Total - 62/100. Eh. I feel like I should offer you some words of wisdom here. Instead, I'm going to go eat a muffin and look at fishnets. Mmm, fishnets. Reivewed by Amanda | ||
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