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dullstar Aug. 01, 2004 -- 1:56 p.m. |
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| dullstar Username - If I get another diary with the word "star" in it, I think I'm going to break something. First Impression - I like how it looks. I don't like the title. It isn't capitalized. It's a title, ferchrissakes! I also don't like how the little paragraph there on you isn't capitalized. Everything else looks good though. Errors - When I maximize your diary, the image runs out at the bottom. That's not your fault, but still. It bugs me. I also really, really don't like how you sporadically capitalize titles... and don't capitalize months on your archives page. Merg. 8/10 Layout - It's pretty. I like how it gives the impression of being busy and disorganized when it's actually very simple. I like that if I maximixe my window, I only have to scroll to read your entry once, as opposed to most diaries with text boxes where I have to scroll twice. I HATE that. Credit to Angry Rectangle Designs, but I'm too lazy to link. A cha cha. 17/20 Content - You have a shitload of entries. Agaist all warnings, I'm going to read whateeever the fuck I want. I'll start at the beginning, here, and work my way backwards. You seem to be rather amusing... but you use a LOT of commas and that makes your train of thought hard to follow sometimes. That might be because I'm not really trying, but still. Something you might want to watch. I liked this entry. It starts off whiny, and then gets funny, and then back to whiny sort of, and then you end it on a serious note. I dunno. I just liked it. Yeah. You're a funny lady. I like reading your diary. I wish I had more shit to bitch at you for, but, I don't. I'm sorry. I just wish you would get better about capitalizing. And work on the comma shit. Commas are good, really, they are, but when you use them all the time, like this, it gets old, see?60/65 Would I Come Back? - Most likely. 5/5 Bonus - I like the shit at the bottom where you can see diary entries from up to three years ago on that day. +1/5 Total - 91/100. Maybe I'm just too lazy to be a bitch today. Meh. Either way, congrats. Insert final fantasy victory music here. Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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