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| evilsweetpea.diary-x Username - ... What the fuck? No, seriously, what the fuck? How high were you when you picked that name? First Impression - Oooo, pills, ooo. Good capitalization though. I seriously hope you aren't angsty. I can't take much more angst this weekend. Errors - Hrm... I think you're good to go. 10/10 Layout - Actually, I guess the pills aren't so bad. They're colorful, and I like colors. The background is white. I like the image mapping done with the layout. That was something I could never figure out. Credit to Chii Designs. The only bad thing is it makes me think you're going to be another run-of-the-mill depressed teenager. 18/20 Content - Yar. I hate it when people call themselves "empty". You're not empty, you're retarded, there's a difference. I'm not really sure how I feel about your writing yet. It's not making me choke or anything, but I'm not completely enthralled either. I will say this though, I like the varied length of entries. It keeps me on my toes. I am so never saying that again. I like the effort you're making to be happy, and to change yourself. I think that's something that more people need to do and I applaud you for taking those steps. Ooo, a fellow explodingdog fan. Don't go back to cutting. I have the distinct impression that you're better than that. And you should feel special that I'm saying that; if it were any other recovering cutter I'd probably tell them to slit their wrists, and to do it the right way. I can actually take it when you say things like this. Okay, enough. I guess you and your boyfriend broke up a couple of months ago, and you're upset about that. Understandable. I wish you would explain it somewhere though. You don't have a cast page, so keeping track of this stuff is a little difficult. Moving right along. Even though you're really upset [and have every right to be] you're trying to keep your chin up, and I think that's great. So many people just sort of give in to depression without trying to change shit and I hate that. I think you'll get through this. As for your actual writing, well, the optimism comes through. You're an intelligent person. I liked reading your diary, but I don't know if I could deal with reading it every day consistantly. It's for you, and it's about you. I think that's a good thing. Diaries should be for whoever is writing them. I just have a hard time caring about random people's problems on the internet. I tend to like political and social commentary better. Anyways, even though it wasn't really my kind of diary, for the most part, I liked it. Good job. If I used smiley faces, I would put one here. 50/65 Would I Come Back? - To see how you're doing. 2/5 Bonus - I liked all the random shit about you in the extras section. +1/5 Total - 82/100. Give us a cast page, dammit. Jesus Christ, I'm getting too nice again. Reviewed by Amanda Megan's comments: Don't know if I'm technically supposed to use this for anything other than requests, but thanks for the review, and I'm amazed you didn't hate me! It was entertaining. I give you 347982 points and a nectarine. | ||
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