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exhausted-faith.diary-x Jun. 26, 2004 -- 5:51 p.m. |
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| exhausted-faith.diary-x Username - Tra la la. I actually did this review already, but then diaryland deleted it because it's a hobag, so you won't get the full attention you deserve because it's fucking tedious. Not like that'll bother you anyways, you only have three and a half million other reviews done anyways. What am I supposed to be talking about? Username, right. Exhausted faith. It sounds religious-y. I know you explain your username and all, but I want to know who or what has depeleted your faith, and what your faith was in in the first place. I dislike the vagueness of it, I guess, and the fact that I feel like it was chosen just because it sounds pretty. Eh. That was hypocritical. All usernames are chosen to be pretty. Oh well. 3/5 First Impression - Interesting template, I can read the text, punctuation and grammar seem to be in order. I also see no disclaimer, this is good. If you do end up writing one, I will be forced to stab you in the gut multiple times. I don't like the green in the layout though. It seems out of place. 4/5 Errors - Your punctuation isn't too hot in the first entries, but that's okay. You've evolved so I am being nice. Are you aware that you have an ungodly amount of layouts? Yes? I would reccomend fixing it. It's fucking annoying. 5/10 Layout - Black, readable, pretty pictures I s'pose. the white lines stop though, and that bothers me. The green image also bothers me. The rest of it is in blue... what the fuck is green doing there? I mean, I like green, don't get me wrong, I'm just saying. Seriously though, fix the multiple layout thing. It was annoying at three in the morning and it's annoying now. 12/20 Content - Short entries in the beginnings, no sense of capitalization, ALL OF THEM CENTERED AROUND A BOY. Or maybe multiple boys. I really have no fucking idea. Tra la la most recent entries... you talking about reviewer juding you when you asked for their opinion... hobos can live alone for long periods of time. Are you saying that hobos are subhuman? Hmmm.. Okay, I'm just looking for reasons to be mean to you now.Mostly because of the layout thing [Jesus Christ, have I shown how much that pissed me off yet?] Blah blah... people who cut do so because they are bored and being bored makes me depressed... There is more to life than exams. Let me ask you: why are you worrying so much? If you fuck up, so what? It's a test. Tests don't determine how good of a person you are, they don't determine how happy you will be. Why are tests and material wealth so important to you? In the end, none of it matters. You will have a car, and a house, and two kids and a husband. You will die. Your husband will die. Your kids will die. Stop worrying so much. You don't know what the picture in your layout is. Well that's just fucking lovely. Nice to see we're all awake and paying attention here. Your values do not match mine, and therefore, I cannot understand or even particularily enjoy your diary. Most of it is very vague, and the parts that aren't feel trivial... like filler. I don't want filler. I want depth and I want emotion and I want to know what motivates you and why. 39/55 Would I Come Back? - Probably not. You don't take advice from reviewers, so why you request all the fucking time is beyond me. You won't change your layout obsession anytime soon. I might drop by just to see if you've accused me of judging you, though. To which I say: bring it on. 2/5 Bonus - You had an assload of extras. Or, well, you would have an assload of extras if extras were something that one could insert into one's rectum. BUT ANYWAYS. I feel like I owe you something for that. And I liked the history page quite a bit. +2/5 Total - 67/100. I think I was nicer to you this time around. Hrm. On a final note though, I really liked this entry. I know it was vague and blahdey blahdey blah, but I liked it. Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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