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opiates Jul. 14, 2004 -- 9:07 p.m. |
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| opiates Username - It reminds me of that Karl Marx quote, "Religion is the opiate of the masses." Bad ass. First Impression - It's a simple, imageless design. I love you. Errors - Not any real errors, but there are some things you do that bother me and I suppose that this is a good place to point them out. You don't capitalize your titles consistantly. You also stopped labelling your entry types. There's nothing wrong with that, I just wish it were more uniform. 8/10 Layout - White with black text, self-designed. The only thing that pises me off about it is the "ndex" as opposed to "index", "rchvs" as opposed to "archives", etc. It just strikes me as kind of stupid. It's your layout though. Obviously. 18/20 Content - So, here's the deal. I actually have no strong opinion on your writing. I know, I know, you're all shocked and amazed. Your diary is... well... it's entirely about a young man you seem to be infatuated with. Or, well, at first you're infatuated with him. Then not so much. Either way, I don't really care. You're a good writer, but you're obviously holding back here. You keep a nice, not so comfortable distance from the reader, and that makes it hard for me to care about you and your writing. 41/65 Would I Come Back? - Every once in a while, to see if you've written something new. I might come back more often if you updated more. 2/5 Bonus - Your diary reminded me of my own. I didn't realize until now how much self-loathing I have built up... +1/5 Total - 70/100. I feel like you spend too much time dressing things up instead of really exploring your feelings. Jesus christ, I'm starting to sound like an episode of Maury. This review probably wasn't fair to you. I'm biased [in a bad way] towards diaries that remind me of my own. I'd like to see you write about more topics. What are your views on politics? God? Humanity in general? Just curious. Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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