Username: Snow is cool, I guess.

First Impression: Ahhh, the font!! And the lack of snow!!

Errors: Simple as pie, no snow, small font, and lack of capitalization of anything. 4/10

Layout: Blue is a good color, but unfortunately, I can't read the font. Granted, that's more my poor eyesight than your diary, but really you could have made the font - and text box - bigger. I don't like that I have to squint and put on my reading glasses to barely be able to read your diary. Other than that, no complaints. 10/20

Content: I'm really confused by your entries. Sometimes you just write without explkaining anything, and I don't know if you're talking about yourself, or something you have seen. And the lack of capitalization, that really bugs me. I can't help it, my job on the yearbook staff is to look for errors in the copy and what not, so this is just painful.

Here is a prime example of everything I've previously mentioned. The lack of capitalization, the misspellings, the NOT MAKING SENSE.

I sort of like your writing, sometimes. You sometimes write things beautifully, but others you - don't.

I sort of skipped around a bit, because you have a million entries, but I've noticed, they're all sort of the same, and none of them are terribly interesting. Of course, they're better than some I've read, but they aren't anything to set you apart from the rest of the diary crowd. I didn't laugh, either. I'm really tired, and bored, or else this would be more in-depth, my apologies. 20/65

Would I come back?: Nay. 0/5

Bonus: Sympathy point. 1/5

Total: 35/100 My eyes hurt now.

Reviewed by Sarah.