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so-far-away.diary-x Aug. 02, 2004 -- 5:44 p.m. |
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| so-far-away.diary-x Username - 'S alright. After a Staind song. I hate Staind, so I'll just pretend that your diary is named after the Nine Days song instead. Mmmm. Nine Days. First Impression - That chick is really hot. Errors - Some typos and misspellings. Nothing worth cremating you alive over. 9/10 Layout - Seriously, that chick is hot. And I like that blue. And the expression. Actually, the only thing I don't like is your choice of font. there's nothing really wrong with it, it's just not my favorite. But to each his own, right? It's also self-designed, which I really like. 19/20 Content - I'm starting because your most recent entry is locked. Interesting. Not many people would admit to feeling nothing over the death of a relative... even if you weren't close. I think I admire you for that. But it is a diary... and you are supposed to admit things like that in diaries... maybe it isn't so amazing after all. Hrm. I don't like how the button the view your locked entries reads "see real beauty" or some shit like that. That seems kind of... what's the word I'm looking for... oh, right, right, arrogant. I'd yell at you for cutting, but I don't think it'd help anything. So, just for the record, it's stupid and stop it. Yar. I do this too. This is going to sound unbelievebly ironic coming from me, but, stop being so damn angry. You want to beat the crap out of your brother. You want to beat the crap out of your mother's ex-husband [understandable, but still, an eye for an eye and all taht...], just lay off yo. Breathe. Count to ten or something. Seriously, it's not fucking important that your brother doesn't do anything. When it's time for him to be independant he'll be completely fucked over because he can't look after himself. And if it really bothers you so much, talk to your mom or dad or something. Yeah, I'm getting really sick of the "see real beauty" thing. I've decided not to read your locked entries because those are for you, and... I dunno, I'd feel wrong about making fun of that shit. I may be a bitch but I can respect other people's privacy and dignity and all that jazz. Stupid. Surely you've been forgiven, be it by a friend, ro your parents, or someone else. Everybody has because everybody FUCKS UP. That includes you, babe. Speaking of church, I'm pretty sure that that bible of yours preaches forgiveness. Okay, down to the criticism. You don't daylog so much, that's good. Actually I think your writing is alright. It's you that I have a couple of problems with. I know you were abused and yadda yadda yadda, but seriously, learn to fucking forgive people. You can't call yourself a christian and then not forgive. 'S hypocritical, and actually, one of the reasons why I hate organized religion so much. Bad things happen. It's a fact. Bad things have always happened, and they will always happen, and very rarely will they happen to people that deserve them. That doesn't mean that you should sit around and dwell on it. Accept that this Tim guy is a scumbag, accept that your mom made a mistake in marrying him, and move on with life. You have some shit to offer the world if you can get past these things. And change that fucking button to something other than see real beauty, before I'm forced to put somebody through a glass window pane. 40/65 Would I Come Back? - To see if you've moved on yet. 1/5 Bonus - That chick is super ultra mega sexy. Damn. I would hella do her. +1/5 Total - 70/100. Be proud. On this site, that's actually pretty good. Bitches! Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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