Username: Ummm... I don't know, it's sort of plain. At least it's not filled with all sorts of random characters that shouldn't be there, like x's and what not.

First Impression: Anime... I'm not too big on that. But, you could still be a good person?

Errors: Well, your little links at the bottom of entries, they don't quite, fit. You see, the past and the present ones do, but the future, well that just doesn't make sense. You can't have a future link because it'll never have an entry there. You can only have the present. This is just a minor problem, but it's bugging the shit out of me, I'm sorry. 5/10

Layout: The anime... I don't know. It's just, so, there. That's more of a personal thing, though. I'm also not sure how I feel about those side text boxes with the random things that could go in that fancy "About Me" page thing you created. And plus when you put your cursor over it, it changes colors and becomes impossible to read. That's a no no. Other than that, it's pretty clean and simple. 10/20

Content: Well... I'll start by saying that I can look past the typo's and bad grammar, considering you are from a different country and all. English isn't your native language, so you get a few points for actually trying, and for the most part succeeding.

This, I like this. I don't know why, but I like it.

I do have a little bit of beef with how you sometimes make your paragraphs be, well, not paragraphs. A paragraph is something that contains roughly five or six sentences that are all related in some way. What you write are chunks of perhaps three sentences at most.

As exemplified here, you kill the elipse. It's a beautiful grammatical tool, but it too has its limits. Cama's work in about 90% of the places you use the elipses. You should use them instead, really.

Whoa! You asterisk-ed out the letters in the words "Fucking" and "Fuck." Why? It's your own damn diary. Why the hell would you need to censor yourself? Are the profanity police going to attack you and make you spend the next ten years of your life sleeping in a cold jail cell because you said fuck twice? No, they aren't. Seriously. Say whatever you want.

Every entry of yours is like a poem. Well, not a poem, more like poeticly writen prose, but you get the point. I don't know how I feel about this. Not everything has to be so carefully articulated. I like it, because it's not as whiney and pathetic as most, but it almost seems far too thought out. It's too flowery, not raw enough. I don't know what I'm trying to say.

Also, I don't like that you sign your name at the bottom of every entry. It's terribly unecessary. You've got your name to the side, and people who are reading it should know that it's you that's writing these things. Oh wait! I seem to have spoken too soon. Finally, an entry that isn't just talking about how dark the world is blah blah blah.

It seems to me that all of your entires are the same. While they are for the most part well writen, they're all the same. No variations. They're all "deep," but they don't change. They all talk about pain, and love, and death, and living, and occasionally rain or something like that. Really. Spice it up a bit.

Fuck, I find myself agreeing and identifying myself with a lot of what you say. I don't know if that means you're a good writer that is above and beyond the rest of the diary writers out there, or if I'm just on a level with the typical diary writing crowd. Because of my confusion, you get a few points deducted. Sorry. 25/65

Would I Come Back?: Can't say that I would. 0/5

Total: 40/100 You just got served.

Reviewed by Sarah.