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sydney453 Jul. 04, 2004 -- 1:48 p.m. |
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| sydney452.diary-x Username - A place and a number. You explain it, so I'm actually okay with this, but if I saw it in a list, I wouldn't click it. Sorry. First Impression - Green! Not my favorite green, but green nonetheless! And a really pretty girl! Yay! And proper grammar/punctuation/etc.! You're off to a good start. Errors - I can't highlight/copy/paste text. This bothers me. 8/10 Layout - GREEEEEEEEEEN! The only thing I don't like are that the scrollbars aren't colored and look out of place. You could fix that yourself with a little effort. I know, I know, it's a children's HTML site, but it's actually really helpful. 17/20 Content - First entry I ran into was one with too many exclamation points, talking about how your boyfriend proposed to you. I can understand that, I mean, you love him and all, but.. I dunno. I hope the rest isn't like that. Your about me entry made me laugh. "Go back to Nonthreatening Boy Magazine or whatever other pit that spawned you!" I started reading here and read to your most recent entry... the one about the proposal. I think I love you. All hail the glory of the English-to-AOLer translator! Mmm, stupidity. I can't decide if I really like you for caring about your cats so much, or if I hate you because you need a life. The entry about your grandmother made me laugh. Mmmmhmmm. You have a great sense of humor about everything. You don't try hard to be funny and I think that's what I like about your diary. There's this sort of amusing optimism that comes through with everything though, even when bad shit happens, and I like that about your writing. However, your entries can be a bit long sometimes, and as I've said before somewhere, I have the attention span of a retarded fruit fly. They also tend to be a bit dayloggish. I guess that's good though, I mean, your dairy is for you and maybe if I knew you personally I'd like it more. Actually, I'd almost definetly like it more. You talk about your dreams a lot too, and that kind of bothers me. You might want to start a seperate diary exclusively for dreams, or put them on another page or something. I don't know. I just don't really care about people's dreams because they don't make any damn sense. I can understand not wanting to send your brother to Iraq, but "nuking the whole place" as you so eloquently put it won't solve anything. I dunno. I guess I want you to care more about the world. I'm also not sure if I should hate you for this or not. I think I want to tell you to be more tolerant of other people, but that would be hypocritical coming from me. Heh. Either way, I like you, I wish I could have gotten more into your diary. You're an interesting person, but your diary really just... doesn't strike my fancy [yes, yes I did just use that phrase]. I want more from you, but I'm not sure of what. Sorry. I wish I could put my finger on it, because that really isn't fair to you. 52/65 Would I Come Back? - Maybe, if I was bored. 1/5 Bonus - GREEEEEN! +2/5 Total - 82/100. I wish I had some words of wisdom to leave you with. Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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