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thegodsmustbecrazy.diary-x Aug. 06, 2004 -- 9:58 p.m. |
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| thegodsmustbecrazy.diary-x Username - It reminds me of Neil Gaiman's book, American Gods. I know it's not an American Gods reference or anything, but still, anything that makes me think of Neil Gaiman is awesome. First Impression - Black and white, and your title is from The Little Prince. Dear sweet Jesus I think I love you. Errors - Who cares? You have the little prince in your title! 10/10 Layout - Self designed, I think. I 'm not sure, I'm unfamiliar with diary-x. Either way, I've no complaints. Just because I hate giving full points for anything though, I'm not sure why you gave fancy names to shit. Just call it the archives and extras and blah blah blah. Merg. After looking at it for a while, it looks somehow... cluttered. I can't really put my finger on what's doing it, though.. 17/20 Content - Started here. You mention the mafia and Paris Hilton getting beaten up all in one entry. I think you just may be a genius. You update reeeally randomly. Five entries on August fifth, none on the sixth, or the first through the fourth... hm. I guess I can't complain though. I hate it even more when people write just for the sake of writing and it's shit like "OMG I'm sooo bored lol." I want to know who you're talking to here. What sparked this entry? At the bottom here, I think you mean C'est la vie. Sometimes you put dividers when you switch subjects, and sometimes you don't. Make up your mind and stick to it. There are some references here that I don't understand. You seem to have this habit of writing entries direct specifically at one person... which is all fine and dandy for you and that one person, but the rest of us are sitting around wondering what the fuck you are talking about. I guess I can't accuse you of not writing for yourself, though. Awww. Your girlfriend is adorable. In an I-Am-So-Not-Trying-To-Steal-Her sort of way, I mean. Awww. You're such an emo kid. And I never use that term. Awww. You're lucky. If I weren't listening to Rasputina right now, I'd probably want to bash your face in for being such an overly emotional fuck. But Rasputina is awesome, and there's something cute about the way you're always all love-struck and poetic over your girlfriend. Aaaand I'm tired and skipping and la la la la. You post poems, songs, etcetera, a lot. I hate that. So very very much. No idea what you're talking about here. Maaaaybe not goiong to bed until two this morning wasn't such a good idea after all. How have I come to this conclusion? This made me laugh. I'm sure it would make most people laugh, but if I weren't tired, it would have made me roll my eyes and want to punch a cat. It's probably for the best that I'm fucking tired, though... I like cats. Moving along. You're funny when you want to be. When you're not funny though, you're talking about your gf or writing about shit no one but you understands or posting lyrics or poems or something like that I don't know I don't care. I can't decide if you're a good writer or not. I mean, I like you as a person, I think. I don't really like your choice of content for the most part. You ave a sort of charming way of writing. I don't know what it is. I just want to sit there and go "awwwwwww!". You bastard. Uhhh advice time! Things you should keep doing: -Posting lego porn -Being funny -Making me go "awwww!" Things you should stop doing: -Not explaining -Talking about your girlfriend all the damn time -Posting lyrics/poems/whatever -Making me go "awwww!" Game over! 42/65 Would I Come Back? - Ehhh probably. And you don't even have to bribe me or anything. +3/5 Bonus - THE LITTLE PRINCE <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 +2/5 Total - 74/100. Really, it's a lot better than it seems. Reviewed by Amanda | ||
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