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theshrike Jul. 17, 2004 -- 1:12 p.m. |
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| theshrike Username - It's a classification of bird, right? Something like that. Anyway, it's vaguely interesting. I might click it if I saw it in a list. First Impression - You have an.. odd layout. It looks unorganized at first glance, but when you look closer, it isn't. I like it. You appear to be capitalizing properly, and I LOVED the way you requested a review [you write something in german! Come on now!] so you're off to a really good start. Errors - Is there supposed to be a big blue square below your entry? It looks like it was cut off from the bit to the side there. And I can't copy and paste small bits of entries. FUCK I FUCKING HATE THAT. 7/10 Layout - It's a Lex design [no link because I'm lazy]. As previously stated, it first looks disorganized, but it isn't really. I like it. I think it suits you. Only thing wrong with it is that I really don't think the blue part is supposed to be below the entry, I think it's supposed to be to the right. Maybe I'm wrong. Or maybe it doesn't show up on your computer. I dunno. Other than that though, you're good. 17/20 Content - AUGH CONAN O BRIEN RING MEMEBER DEATH DEATH DEATH. But you're also a memeber of the hannibal ring, so it's all good. I'll pretend that they sort of neutralize eachother. Um, anyway, I decided to read a chunk of your older entries, and then a bunch of your latest ones. Brilliant. "... it's a dog-eat-dog world... so don't feel bad if you have to gnaw on a puppy dog to survive." You know, I remember making fun of Mr. Rogers when I heard about it. I didn't mean it of course, I was just being a bitch, but you made me feel bad about that. You made me feel remorse! Feel proud. Feel very, very proud. It's unbelievebly hard to get me to regret something. I would miss you if you were gone. I know, I know, you were stoned, I'm just saying. Now, skipping ahead! Wheee! Eh. I'm too lazy to link any more recent entries. BUT THEY'RE GOOD AND EVERYBODY SHOULD GO READ THEM RIGHT NOW. So, okay. I was expecting to be able to tear you apart. There isn't really anything wrong with your writing though, and there isn't anything wrong with YOU as a person ['cept for the Conan O Brien thing... seriously, cut that shit out] so you're pretty much good to go. Your diary is entertaining and you have a great sense of humor about yourself. I'd tell you to lay off the pot, but it's a problem you're already perfectly aware of. You might want to make a seperate page for surveys though. Seriously, no one, no matter HOW MUCH they love you, is going to sit through five hundred random questions about you. You might also consider putting those livejournal quiz results in your livejournal, as opposed to you diaryland diary. I'm just sayin'. I think you use humor as a defense mechanism though. And the only reason I put "I think" in front of that sentance was to avoid offending you. Yay! It's okay though. I mean, just... I dunno. You have a lot in you. Obviously this isn't the place to get most of it out, though I think it started that way. You might want to start another, more emotional diary for you. Okay, enough of the psychoanalysis. I love you. Marry me. 58/65 Would I Come Back? - Hells yeah. 5/5 Bonus - You're funny as fuck, you talk about politics, and the first sentance of your request was in german! GERMAN! And it was something about cheese! Don't remember what, but it made me love you even more. +3/5 Total - 90/100. IT IS TIME TO DANCE! Reviewed by Amanda Cristin's comments: Wow, you have perfect timing. I was just updating when I got my results- and I was quite shocked! Thanks, really, I wasn't expecting what I got. Oh, and the big blue box underneath the 'last entry, next entry' links? I had to move that for a good reason: it used to be underneath my navigation bar, but the image covered text in my entries. Resizing the image didn't help, so I just moved it (it pisses me off, too). Anyway, thanks for the review! Cheers! | ||
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